Newgrounds.com — Everything, By Everyone.
Age/Gender: 19, Male
Location: Texas, United States
Job: Hobbyist Programmer
Newgrounds Stats
Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 120 / 180
Exp. Rank #: 174,465
Voting Pow.: 3.68 votes
BBS Posts: 0 (0 per day)
Flash Reviews: 11
Music Reviews: 0
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
All Flash Reviews
11 Reviews | 3 w/ Responses
"yes yes yes yes", hilarious.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
"Mmm, play it again..."
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Not bad. You just need to learn flash / animation :3
Well, I can definitely see the David Firth inspiration. Overall, the "NO KILLING BABIES 'Fuck'" part made me laugh.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
The game concept is interesting, however the penalty for getting a negative is way too much. You end up losing if you get a negative at all.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
I love Explosm. The "did I lose" guy was pretty funny.
Author's Response:
lol. Have you checked the original comic yet?
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Actually, I never noticed that pipe before... o.0
On to the "flash". Well, put simply, it's crap. Obviously no effort.
You could at least cut out the "YOU LIEK MAJIK?!" dude from his background using Photoshop (or MSPAINT!).
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
You shouldn't take reviews like this personally.
What I see here is something thrown together in a few hours. There's no inspiration and no real plot or funniness. It's simply boring.
Aside from the "story", the animation itself was lacking. You really should study up on some cinematography. Also, experiment with Microsoft Sam :) You can alter words phonetically so they sound (and are understood) much better.
Good luck on your next submission!
Author's Response:
thanks for the tip. :)
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Excellent work on the music. For the most part, it fit very well.
As a presentation, I can imagine this being great.
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Besides the whole "My Newgrounds" meme being boring in the first place, this was an "OK" post processing of some video. Over all, not that polished or interesting.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.
Good effort, I guess.
It helps if you have some kind of ... motive or goal for your piece before you try and submit it.
- Rate this review:
- Helpful!
- Useless.
- Flag as abusive.